Tuesday, 12 November 2013

Talking about a Storybird

Hello Year 3 here are your wonderful storydirds: (Filip) (Zuzi) (Adela) (Amir) (Eva) (Liza) (Adrian)
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50 comments:

  1. Mr B22 November 2013 at 01:57

    This is very Good Adrian

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  2. Richard22 November 2013 at 02:08

    I liked Benet Adrian.

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  3. zuzanna22 November 2013 at 02:08

    it was good amir

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  4. Richard22 November 2013 at 02:09

    I liked Benet Adrian

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  5. Amanda22 November 2013 at 02:11

    It was very cute Eva

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  6. filip22 November 2013 at 02:12

    Realy incredible, Adelka that was good

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  7. Richard22 November 2013 at 02:12

    I liked yours Filip

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  8. Amanda22 November 2013 at 02:13

    It was epic Adela

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  9. zuzanna22 November 2013 at 02:13

    Adela it was perfect i loved your story

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  10. Amanda22 November 2013 at 02:14

    It was crazy cool filip

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  11. Richard22 November 2013 at 02:14

    I liked your backround Amir

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  12. EVA22 November 2013 at 02:14

    1. It was very good and interesting. Liza

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  13. Amanda22 November 2013 at 02:16

    It was realy cool Adrian

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  14. albert22 November 2013 at 02:16

    Good work Filip it was a cool story.

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  15. joori22 November 2013 at 02:16

    good story eva really good

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  16. Patrik22 November 2013 at 02:16

    It was veary cool Adrian.Amir it was veari bad. Liza it was funny.

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  17. filip22 November 2013 at 02:16

    Very good liza, that was a nice story

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  18. liza22 November 2013 at 02:16

    1.It was very good and very nice sentences.
    2.It was cute
    Eva

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  19. Rumin and Christopher22 November 2013 at 02:16

    you have a good story Fillip

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  20. ishan22 November 2013 at 02:17

    1.adela our story was amazing

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  21. Matej22 November 2013 at 02:17

    it was great Adrian

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  22. albert22 November 2013 at 02:17

    I did not understand this story Adela.

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  23. filip22 November 2013 at 02:18

    Adrian, what a scary story

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  24. albert22 November 2013 at 02:19

    I love that story Zuzzana

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  25. eva22 November 2013 at 02:20

    2. It was good but I did not undrestent it.

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  26. Christopher22 November 2013 at 02:20

    Dear Liza,
    You have a bit of spelling mistakes you spell Rainbow r a i n b o w not rainbou

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  27. Matej22 November 2013 at 02:20

    I liked the pictures Liza

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  28. Aron22 November 2013 at 02:20

    I like war storys amir

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  29. ishan22 November 2013 at 02:21

    2. amir our story is awsome good amir

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  30. Amanda22 November 2013 at 02:21

    It was lovly leza

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  31. sophie22 November 2013 at 02:22

    1)Good Amir but breef.
    2)amazing Liza.
    3)intresting adrian.

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  32. zuzanna22 November 2013 at 02:22

    it was a funny story adrian.

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  33. Harune22 November 2013 at 02:22

    Eva that was a great story!

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  34. Patrik22 November 2013 at 02:22

    It was cool Adrian

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  35. joori22 November 2013 at 02:23

    this is a really nice story

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  36. EVA22 November 2013 at 02:23

    3. It's great I didn't now this.

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  37. ADRIAN22 November 2013 at 02:24

    1) Liza it was perfect but it didint hav sens.
    2) Zuza it was briliant but it looks un finish.
    2) It was a briliant non fiction book.

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  38. Christopher22 November 2013 at 02:24

    Dear Eva,
    you put a lot of animals in your book that I think you should sell a lot of books in the market.

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  39. Amir22 November 2013 at 02:24

    congratulation filip

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  40. ishan22 November 2013 at 02:24

    filip your story was funy ha ha ha

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  41. Harune22 November 2013 at 02:25

    Eva that was a great story!

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  42. zuzanna22 November 2013 at 02:25

    zuzanna it was emazing

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  43. matyas22 November 2013 at 02:26

    I liked your story Eva because lots of good things hapend.
    I liked your story Adelka because it is about families.
    I like your story Amir because you have lots of things hapening in your story.
    I like your story Zuza because there was a bad gy.

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  44. aron22 November 2013 at 02:26

    I like sharks adrian

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  45. tonca22 November 2013 at 02:27

    it was very cute but you had some spelling mistakes liza
    it was nice but you could add something to it because i realy kindov dident know what was going on and did they get eny presents i dont know Eva.
    nice but what happend next did they come home and stoped her or what happend next Zuzy

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  46. Mariana22 November 2013 at 02:27

    1)i like this book becase it was exsating but good story Amir.
    2)grate story Adrian but try to put there more muvmunts.
    3)cool story Sofy.

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  47. Christopher22 November 2013 at 02:27

    Zuzi you have a lot of information

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  48. joori22 November 2013 at 02:27

    wow 44 children. good jod zuzi

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  49. Harune22 November 2013 at 02:28

    Eva that was a great story!

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  50. ishan22 November 2013 at 02:45

    eva amazing

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